Use your Google blog to respond to
the following response.
1.
Writing
Focus: Constructed Response: Choose one of the following prompts and respond
accordingly.
b.
DAY
#4 9.22.16
i.
Opinion/Argument:
1.
Pick
something that matters to you and use an analogy or figure of speech to try to
get other people to care about it too.
ii.
Personal/Nonfiction
Narrative:
1.
Pick
something you know a lot about and use an analogy to explain it to other people
(ex. the human brain is like a computer;
DNA is like a secret code; playing the piano/changing a tire/dancing
salsa/beating this video game is like….)
iii.
Fiction Narrative:
1.
What
is an issue/message that is important to you? Try to write a short story where
the characters/plot/setting ARE an
analogy to explain this message.
The thing I know best is soccer I grew up playing it and watching it. When you play soccer is like being on top of the world, like no can stop me. It's like the soccer ball is your best friend. You have to takeep care of it as if it was a baby and you one can take it away from you. Soccer can get you through anything. It's like having a friend that is always there for you when you need them. Soccer can take you all around the world. It's like having a private plane that could take you anywhere in the world.
ReplyDeleteSomething's that's important to me is family. Family is like a stack of bricks, together they make a strong structure , but remove one and the whole structure will collapse
ReplyDeleteAn issue/ message that is important to me is to take care of your body because if you don't then horrible, life threatening things can and possibly will happen to you. Your body is like a temple, you cannot disrespect or mistreat your temple. If you bring unholy things into your temple it can dramatically affect your temple and you will have to bring holy things into your life to fix it. As in saying, if you mistreat your body, then you will have to be on things like medication and therapy to fix your body (temple) and it possibly might not go back to the exact same way it was before.
ReplyDeleteSomething that matters to me is having somebody in your corner. Having somebody in your corner doesn't always mean family. It could means friends as well. If you have somebody in your corner than you don't have to worry about being alone or just fear of not being the best you. If the best you is being alone, then by all means be alone, but if your like me and likes to have somebody in your corner then go find that person or people who will always have your back no matter what.
ReplyDeleteSomething that's means to me is my family.Family is like a house everyone have different floors because everyone is different in their own way.But those floors build the house and make it's structure safe and strong. Houses go through many things but they stick together just like my family. But when something happen to one floor it happens to the whole house nd changes everything out of place.
ReplyDeleteAn important message to me is that you should always remember that no matter what you will always be there for yourself. Even when you think there is no one there you have yourself.
ReplyDeleteOne day Alex and her friends went to the mall. While walking around a group of girls Alex did not get along with walked up to her. Alex friends were friends with the other girls. So they didn't try to stop the girls from messing with Alex. Alex was disappointed and sad she thought her friends would be there for her. She was sad but she realized she stayed stong by herself even when she didnt have help.
An important message to me is that you should always remember that no matter what you will always be there for yourself. Even when you think there is no one there you have yourself.
ReplyDeleteOne day Alex and her friends went to the mall. While walking around a group of girls Alex did not get along with walked up to her. Alex friends were friends with the other girls. So they didn't try to stop the girls from messing with Alex. Alex was disappointed and sad she thought her friends would be there for her. She was sad but she realized she stayed stong by herself even when she didnt have help.
An issue that is very important to me is suicide and depression. Every day there are people of all ages battling there internal demons. I want to be able to help with that by becoming a physchologist. I know that some people don't want to be helped but there's always room to help others. It's terrible to think that someone is pushed so far that there only option is to take there life. There was once a boy who's name I won't say who felt like he had no way out. Although, he never resorted to hurting himself or taking his own life. Instead he wrote. His feelings spilled onto the paper. It felt like a cathartic release. He loved what he did and he loved to share it. He's happier than ever thanks to that and it was all because he wrote what he felt.
ReplyDeleteA message that is very important to me is that support is the key to success. I think that the only way for you to succeed is if others are there to support you. There is always family, friends, others, and even yourself that helps motivate you to do something. You never know you will succeed, unless you actually do it. The only way for you to do it, is if you have the support of others, or yourself. That is why there is people that believe in you, and most importantly if you believe in yourself. Which is why I think that having support is the key to success.
ReplyDeleteSomething that matters to me is art. Art is simply any idea made into reality. Its is something that cannot go away because new ideas always form the more time goes on. Art cannot be destroyed and is one of the most invincible concepts to me.
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